dooseyboy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Rhg # 1 Rex Vs Fllffl]

make it longer

this is not worth submitting man.
make it waaaayy longer and more extreme

leo345610zzz responds:

this is only no.1!

[animation about anything?]

should have done the whole song

it didn't go for long enough, you so should have done the whole song.

pheef responds:

i was going to :) its such a long song though, maybe ill finish it one day. but after about 15 seconds, the novelty of a dancing penis wears off.

[Eat your "Vaggies"]

this was awful

the sound quality made me want to throw up, this is so bad, it may as well be a clock submission.
i hated it, if you are going to be TeamSuperAwesome, then make something super awesome, this was NOT super awesome.
TIPS:
fix the quality and volume of the audio, get a better mic and make the music lower, and get a real girl to do the tomato's voice.
this hurt my ears and my eyes

TeamSuperAwesome responds:

Hey man, thanks for the response, but a zero?
DICK MOVE

[Ninja & Gangster]

omg

no
practice madness in your own time.
stick with basic tweens with stuff like stickmen or sprites.
otherwise a very good concept

StephanLABA responds:

thanks..........I guess...?

[Countless]

everyhing was perfect except for 2 things

on the scene towards the end where we look at the outside of the house you can see the stage. (the white area when you made it).
this may be a minor thing but makes the whole thing look messy, makes people wonder "how much time did this guy actually spend making this?... 5 minutes?"
also the words at the end go too fast.
i recieved this email also and i thought it was nice

IzakFlashMan responds:

Cheers for the critque. Crap, did I really leave in a piece of the stage? Crap, thats the most un pro thing I have done in a while. Thanks for pointing that out, Ill correct that. Probably not worth a republish though. And I had a sneaky suspicion that the words were going a bit quick. Damn...
I don't know how you got the email to because it was made up on the spot and only sent to me. She's cheating on me isnt she. 0_o

[Spongebob SquareDUB!]

i like it

but it seems like something more suited to youtube.
if it was animated by you it would get more attention

DAGamesOfficial responds:

yeah it probably would, I just wanted to see how well it'd do on newgrounds. I think it did pretty well :)

[Majul Tour of Rove Sc 5.1]

booooooo

why you try a preloader and putting all the parts in one flash!!!!!!!!!
booooo

majul responds:

booo? Why you try to have proper grammar and how about i smack you in that pudgy face of yours... THE WHOLE THING RUNS FOR 21 MINS, AND I CAN'T CHANGE THE FILES CAUSE I DON'T HAVE FLASH!!!!! ..... Fucking Michelin Doll

[The Eden Project]

OMG TEH CRAZEH BONES!!!!!

it was pretty good if you check back to your thread about preloaders i tried to ask yo but anyway.
it was nice i spose no really funny.
it would be prefered if you made it in flash though

eewawoowa responds:

Thank you for the first decently written review on this.

Yeah, I know it would be preferred in flash, but flash confuses me.

[Paper!!]

fps training.....

hhhmmm do you know what fps means? (frames per second) so really it frame by frame animating.........

Seatha responds:

Yeah I want to animate frame by frame, and it's my first frame by frame animation. ^^;
So I call it fps training xD

[Midget #4:finale]

i liked this one

but this and all of them need preloaders and they all need more work in the frames.
its pretty obvious you did these in pivot and i like the whole thing about the midget nijna things (call the next ones minja!) so yeah work harder which pivot dfo you use for this??

wjimmyw responds:

i used pivot 2.25 i have pivot 3 beta now though.
and did you notice how the third one...didn't work at all.
that was the one where i tried to do a preloader.
and it didnt work.