everyhing was perfect except for 2 things
on the scene towards the end where we look at the outside of the house you can see the stage. (the white area when you made it).
this may be a minor thing but makes the whole thing look messy, makes people wonder "how much time did this guy actually spend making this?... 5 minutes?"
also the words at the end go too fast.
i recieved this email also and i thought it was nice